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PostPosted: Fri Aug 11, 2017 3:11 am    Post subject: Heartbroken would like some feedback Reply with quote
Forever will it linger on my mind... a deep sleep...a life fortified in solitude... the pain of losing you... the pain of missing you... forever locked away in this dark tomb... where the lifeless walks... where breathe no longer draws...a final resting place... where I lay... the memories of you plays never ending... I once knew happiness... I once knew love... I once knew your smile...now buried away... Happiness is a pain which cuts the deepest... your heart no longer with me... what is left is mine... it bleeds with every beat from the scare you left within me... what I truly seek is only a dream away... so I will dream... closing my eyes... forever cutting all worldly ties... my final goodbye... i will see you again in the next life...
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 11, 2017 5:49 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
you must be very sad. Your writing is deep. Brother/sister, how do you know her/his heart is no longer with you? Did they broke it off? Have you told them how you felt?
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 24, 2017 9:15 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
If you love a person this much, why stop now? To love someone this much is so rewarding even if you walk alone. If losing her/him is as painful as death, why say your good bye? Brother/Sister, everything happens for a reason, you love this much for a reason. Donít underestimate the power of love. I wish you luck and hope you find light.
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